Guild Wars

The original version of this novel featured a detailed s*x scene between the female lead and the villain, where she felt pleasure. This forced NTR moment, where the protagonist walks in on them, completely derailed the story and left readers frustrated. After heavy backlash, the author tried to "fix" it by editing the scene, but it felt shallow and unconvincing. The emotional damage was done, and the plot twist felt unnecessary, ruining the story's potential. Disappointing and unredeemable.

Tch. The NTR part of this novel was handled so fvcking bad, author decided to create a story that started with NTR, from the beginning it's obvious that author planned to make the Exgf to become the heroine of the story by how much POV she gets. But the story isn't well planned. I can tell the author didn't really know what to do with the NTR plot (which pretty much his idea), that's why it wasn't addressed 'til chapter 30. By chapter 30 Author got lazy and decided to just rush all of it and crammed everything in this tiny chapter, author just wanted to get back the MC and his Exgf real quick without any proper process. To summarize. . . Old timelime: Antagonist blackmails GF to sleep with him > GF agreed > MC found out > MC asks EXGF why she betrayed him > EXGF refuse to say anything > MC get revenge > MC dies. Present Timeline: MC asks EXGF why she betrayed him > EXGF told him she did it to protect him > EXGF cry cry > MC Blames himself, hugs her and forgives her.

The story is very interesting at the beginning I was quite annoyed but then I started getting more excited and including the character development and the story is also funny a lot and sometimes the MC was too shameless and still much more and yes there's a lot of information dumping and sometimes an entire chapter is taken by information did we already read but that doesn't bother me much and my conclusion I think Guild wars is still an amazing novel. funny and interesting I really hope the Creator will focus more on it if possible

liked trying to read anything that got an interesting synopsis, and yes this novel is interesting, read about half i guess but had to drop it 'cause mc and his gf(s) kinda got irritating.

In this novel, the main character finds himself wielding an extraordinary level of power - from harnessing nuclear force to establishing a global network of criminal influence. However, amidst this promising premise, the story falters. It loses its unique spark in favor of generic storytelling and lacks the depth needed to truly captivate readers. Although the writing exhibits strength, it struggles to mask the narrative's shallowness. The central debate revolves around the protagonist's overwhelming abilities, with some applauding the grandeur while others decry its imbalance and lack of struggle.

Ok so here you can gain absolute 'control' of yourself and your surroundings *just by playing game*, my man mc literally got himself a nuke, built the largest criminal organisation in the real world **just by playing game**. I usually read around 60 chapters for any new novel before dropping it but the amount of cringe, hypocrisy, shit and generic this novel is overflowing with I couldn't read past 29 chps. So all in all its not worth the read and if you want to read something similar then just read "re:evolution online" although its also sh. it but at least it's good sh. it compared to this novel. Anyway you can just read till 30 chps and will know if this is your cup of tea or not. " By the way I gave it 2 star cuz at least the writing is good unlike some other novels where both writing and story are sh. it"

I really enjoyed this because of the unique systems and the economics and romance contained within the story, the Mc has a shameless personality which I find hilarious

Not too bad. It's a bit bland, but it works as a good pallate cleanser when reading other novels. I found it sorta intriguing to read. So yea, if you aren't sure what new novel to start, might aswell start this.

This novel doesn't have a substance. its like you're eating something bland without any seasoning. mc don't feel like a real person and other characters are just 2d model without emotional touch to it