My Pick Up Artist System

Great novel , funny asf with lots of references but i don't like the extra jokes on the achievements after a while they start to get a lil boring but i really need more chapters of this I heard it's on hiatus or the author dropped it Such a shame

as an amateur work it will inherently need improvement. but for what it is it is amazingly well done. Funny as hell. real world relevant advice. decent story. decent sm*t. all in all an enjoyable read. I'm only on cp 200 something but looking forward to polishing this off soon. ;-)

One of the better sm*t novels I've read. Some of the pickup advice at the beginning is pretty valid, same with the information on how women differ from men when it comes to dating. Author does have an issue with inserting weird song parodies about s*x and cringe jokes, I tend to just skim those parts though. Despite that this is well written and easy to read. This novel is either on a very long hiatus or dropped. Surprising though I really enjoyed reading this novel. I'd definitely give it a read.

Fun novel at the start, but becoming more and more boring for me in the later chapters, but is still a good read though if you want some laughs.

This is a fun novel and one of the best of its genre in my opinion. The author has done a good job to prevent repetition of circumstances that makes reading it, boring. Finally, the story follows a logical flow of events with a loser MC who gradually learns and becomes good at picking up girls. For some reason I cannot rate this as 5 star in my device so I can only rate it 4 star

For those who are looking for a mature/sexual oriented novel, but with actual background and actually skill development—in terms of picking up women—this is a must read. By the way, the tips on this novel are not fake at all, or at least the majority aren’t, I’ll let you all figure which ones are which.

One of the best out there in the genre. There are tips here which can actually be used in real life. The sm*t is top notch and almost all girls got personality. It has bucket loads of humor and anime references. Honestly had the author kept on updating then this wouldve been easy top 50.

If anyone likes traditional sexual dynamics this novel is a must read. This novel has some of the best comedy while also adding great western dating advice, with great insights on how western women actually act. As i’m from the U. S many of the general ideas stated at the beginning of the novel could be helpful for someone in college or inexperienced sexually.

I'm not really a fan of comedy novels but this shit is top tier. Comedy is at another level, story line as a steady pace( not rushed even though my boy receiving some godly cheat and it not slow), its not like the other R-18 novels that just comes up with outrageous reasons females throw themselves at the MCs. You get to see him progress in the art of seduction, from the ground up

It's a good novel and i like it. The early chapters weren't the best but it turns better the more you read, so if you can pass the early parts without dropping it will become a good novel.