White Online

I give it 4 stars because I enjoyed the novel but the battle is quite predictable and below peak level, it's have a good plot but too rush. I like that mc came from a wealthy and nice family and have a good background (I just don't know for others), but it was too good that mc rarely struggle. I also like that mc have a lovelife but his girlfriend is too girly (I will love it more if FL is a little bit more mature). MC is smart and not arrogant which is mc's charm and lastly I love that it contains myths and legends but I feel like the word "God" is too normal, like every chapter you will read it twice or more (it wood be good if this word will rarely mention or just being mention in special events of the story). thank you.

Quite enjoyed this novel. Other authors could have easily dragged the story into twice the number of chapters but this was straight forward. The ending was rushed though!

Dropped at chapter 561. Unbearable quality drop in later chapters resulting in what could have been best to be below average. I don't know what the author was thinking or if he was even thinking. 3 stars only coz the initial 300 something chapters are really good

Another case of an author wanting their managers n character to be a genius but not living up to that irl. An author can only make their character as smart as themselves so instead they make everyone around them dumb af. The main is also brain-dead when the author feels like it will drum up tension. It's not terrible but it's also not good.

was just here because i wanted to read something to occupy my mind but the writing was so bad the synergy was just im not going to lie i lost some braincells reading this and its not often that, whatever ig what i want to say is that everything is going good for mc he got a harem going on everyone wants to f*ck him or crossdress him because he is apparently so f*ck*ng cute or handsome? idk man i just know one thing author doesn’t come from the same world as i do jesus

I Like the overall premise of the story, it's more light hearted and relaxing and gives off this cozy vibe. But it can be hard to read at sometimes when the MC and other characters are annoying or weird, but overall nice read

The book was very good at the start of the story with a lot of plot and advancements. But after a while I got the feeling that the author was not putting as much effort into the story as he did before. The ending is very nice for the story and gives you a nice sense of closure.

novel is good at the start, i was immersed on the vr story but man mc was too dense it was frustrating sometimes. and all the girls/women attitude, c'mon man

The starting chapters of the story is great, romance was good, even fight scenes are well explained. Then comes the revenge part of the story it was so frustrating that I would have dropped this novel because it was said that it is an intelligent mc but what author done is except mc he made every other side character dumb. I am giving this 3 stars just because the ending is satisfying which is rare.

This had a really good start but definitely gonna disappoint you in the middle to the end of the novel . Everything's scale is too much I mean author made a really really really big world and couldn't handle it so when this happened what did he do ?? First neglected a lot of charecters Second mixed them at the end of the novel and make a mess . The final war is a total mess and author didn't show us the fight between mc and the Final Boss he just time skipped it . Romance is not good either let me tell you why : met her once in the game then accidentally saw her in hospital in reall life and BANG now their together no real development and her only trait is that she's a yandere . One thing I didn't like ( but many may like ) is his weapon , it's a musket and you can tell how limited he can be . But will all of these negative points it can be enjoyable especially for those who are reading this genre fotmr their their first time . One final advice always read some chapters and don't rely only on reviews and comments bc everyone have their own likes and dislikes so you may read it and reallly like this 😁👋